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Go easy on me is my first ever flash creation :) tell me what you like and dislike I am open to honest feedback :D
Very good attempt...
You seem to have the story telling ability to make a very deep noire flash. I'd just recommend working on drawing characters more, either outside of flash or through other means. If you did that, and slowed down your pacing a LITTLE, you could have something worthy of a daily award.
If you continue doing interactive movies, make it a little more convenient to go back to your previous choices.
Very short! Job well done though. Don't forget to abbreviate (=
A Good try
For a First flash I am actually impressed. You definitely have potential. I would reccomend drawing more detailed characters and using a higher frame rate but otherwise, a good attempt.
would the robber cut her head off... over kill
I actually liked it, it had some excitement and I really wanna know what happened and why, it could be a big complot! It has potential to be a great exciting story! I wanted to play much more! If you made it larger and make a good story out of it I wouldn't mind the simple design because the story is good and the most fun is it's a movie in which you have to interact and you don't quite know what's coming next! If you would make arterial ends instead of one 'right' direction, that would be super awesome! But that's maybe too much to ask :p Maybe I should just go and buy a computer game like that :p
A short film about a park bench
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