Pretty good...
For a first animation! But it needs more work. Keep it up!
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This is one of my first animations!
Tell me whatcha think!
***Sorry that it keeps looping with the music all funky : /
O.K. but.
needs some work, its allright for a starter flash.
It's okay,
but seems unfinished. There doesn't seem to be much point to it, other than to test the animation. I would suggest developing your next project a bit further in terms of plot or design before submitting it.
Fix the music, don't loop it, add a replay button.
Just because it's one of your first animation doesn't mean you should have uploaded it.
That was pretty good
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