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HI, this is my first successful flash project, and it is just something I wanted to do to make sure I knew how to upload a completed flash video. I didn't think much about the plot for this project.
you said my animation sucked? really?!
You should even be talking! wtf was that? i know 2 year olds that can draw better then that piece of garbage!
Is that it?
Seriously, there's a reason they say to never submit your first animation. I made the same mistake.
Art is terrible, animation is choppy, good choice in music, but the animation just stops. You could make something more out of this. Add to the 'dreary day', give it an ending, have him murder that bird with an AK, SOMETHING.
Giving you a generous 1/5 and 1/10 purely for the fact that it's a first flash and the pictures did move along with pretty music that kept me company while writing this onslaught of words.
You need to know moar about flash!
Pls get a preloader...
And you need a stop action.
And set the sound to stream.
this is totally useless and boring.
But practice practice!
A short film about a park bench
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