Lol.

A walking animation would've done wonders for this. Also, when she walked across the top floor of the mansion, she should've been behind the railings. MS Paint is your friend in this situation. Changin facial expressions, even if it's just a one frame difference, could convey greater comedy and up the quality quite a bit. It's cute, though, and you did a really good job with the sound.

simple

Not exactly exciting, but it does have a kind of story to it, though poorly expressed.

The opening thing with your name thrown at us many times is irritating.

The background art is surely taken from somewhere else, so you should credit it. Is the character art original ? if not credit it.

The animation is very crude. Having the girl glide along in front of the balastrade upstairs is just silly.

sound not bad, music OK.

Story limited- you would not really know what was going on without the authors notes.

Anyhow, L*'s- welcome to the Portal from the Dragons & Spirits !