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Love me song Luna. anyways, new computer; doesn't like flash all that much, wouldn't even let me make a repeat button. anyway, maybe in time.
WHY IS THIS MATURE
Nice little speed paint thing and you do have very good artistic abilities but a bit boring.
I would suggest a background while your drawing of luna is very nice a background would be more pleasurable to the eye. lol I did like the girl she made me chuckle.
I like it, anyways
I like Luna so you get a good rating from me!
This just seems to be a little speed painting project. It turns out nice in the end since she is doing a Rainbow Dash pose but it falls on deaf ears due to some lacking content here and such. Also could ditch the flashing girl button at end since it seems to kind of overlap part of Luna when clicked on too.
Things that could be done to drastically improve on this little short piece is firstly adding a background song, possibly My Little Pony remixes related though. I guess the Cupcakes eurobeat would have fit well here or a Luna based theme would have worked as well.
Another thing that could have been done to improve this a bit is adding a background to it. Just seeing Luna in that pose tells us she is about to do a mission but without a background it seems kind of blank and we have no idea what kind of mission she is going on. Is she going to be coming back from the moon or helping her older sister vanquish an old foe from ages past? At least give the viewer something to run with so we know what she is going to try doing.
One last thing that could be done to improve this piece is adding a possible Newgrounds preloader to the start of this then music would play while the speed painting is in progress. Then for the replay button, just add a button but try making it relevant. A girl flashing the viewer when clicked on seems quite irrelevant sadly. I guess Apple Bloom in the corner or something acting a replay button would work well though.
Overall, it's nice but could use some improving to it. Try to follow the above tips when redoing it and it should turn out just fine.
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