I guess sense this is you're first "real" flash Ill give it three and a half starts. The comedy is okay, I guess its just not my type but still its an okay flash. Note sure if you used a mouse or not but if you did then the drawings are okay. But either way they still look a little rushed. I mean to spend "five days" on a a minute and a half song is an okay thing. It just seemed that the drawing are a tad sloppy. But the animation itself was really well. Very smooth and not jagged. So take this as constructive criticism. I hope for you to get better as an animator and see you hopefully rise to the top.

lol

funny

For your first flash, that's pretty good!

I understand that drawing takes time on the computer, especially for the first time.
You can learn how to animate the parts of the body, maintaining the proportions of
the size of the characters, how to add more shade on the objects to improve the 3D, using some tools as illustrator and photoshop for better results.

I loved how you merged the characters of Akatsuki in
the intro of Bleach season 1.
Madara acted as Kon and was trampled by everyone! Yeeee!!!
At the end, Deidara was dressed like Orihime, he looked so gay!

You have potential! Take time, steps by steps, to learn how to use Flash.
Above all, you have chosen to do something you enjoy doing, not boring things. Continuing like this, you will be a pro!
Good luck.

Actually

I can say you've got potential, seek some tutorial about coloring and Frame by frame animation, it's tedious, hard but it's obviously worth it.
Also backgrounds

Pretty cool.

i think you did great on screen transactions and backgrounds, but the charecters are kinda ugly!
still its better than all the other bullshit on here.