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This is my first adventure Flash 8 game. I think it's not so bad.
This feels more like a demo. There is only one level. Improve the graphics, add a story, and objectives.
Not anything new, but the jump feels kinda stiff, but not as bad as games like Castlevania for the NES. 2 points off. Difficulty is somewhat of a joke. The only provided hazard is the stiff jump. Other than that, it's your average platformer. The art is kinda bad, but since it's a first submission, I'll let it slip by. And if you want, I might be able to make you some music for the game.
1 point off for lack of difficulty.
I noticed a bug. If you fall and get to 0 lives and hit the spikes and let it drain, you don't die until you fall again. But it's not much of an RPG. Try adding some stuff like gaining attacks, maybe some items, and some other things. I hope you consider fixing these issues in your next game!
Not only that, but the music is awesome the first time, but gets EXTREMELY repetitive. So another point off. But the concept is silly, but it doesn't feel like the Crush can has a point. 1 point for lack of story.
Once again, I hope you read this and try fixing these issues for your next game!
thank you for all your suggestions and i'm gonna really try to fix your issues for my next game eventualy for my next level!
Not very bad...
Hey dude.Nice game you got here.I like it from parts to parts-the character,the art and the music.It is not bad at all for a first game.But there are some stuff to fix-don't leave too much place between platforms,so we can walk on them without falling.Then you should make the level a little longer and maybe it is good to have a checkpoint.Also you should add some more extras.You should make stuff more difficult by adding enemies or traps perhaps.Everything else is OK-the player can walk normally and jump,it has nice music and art style.But it will be good to have some instructions and menu.I will give you 6 stars-for music,for art,controls,health power ups,traps and your time making it.Also can't wait for 2nd level and up.Keep up making this.:D
Thank you very much, I really appreciate . The only problem that I have is cause I dont know how to make my level 2 and how to make at the beggining of my game a scene who show's the instructions and a play game button. If you know how to do please tell me. Thnx!!!
its not horrible
for a first, but ist super glitchy , and teh music is annoying, also... level 2 isnt working
I know the level 2 it's not working cause it's just the level 1...
An addictive and challenging simple math puzzle game
And so it dreamt.
Help Eddie get his watermelon so he can finally spend a nice and relaxing day at the beach
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