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Jun 22, 2011 | 8:40 AM EDT

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Preview of Ashton origans episode 1.

Buttons working.

My best animation yet.

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sonicflare9sonicflare9

Rated 2 / 5 stars

ummm

It takes forever to load!


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sonicx666666 responds:

I tested it on here myself and it worked perfectly...


SchafdawgSchafdawg

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Best animation???

Well, first of all keep everything in the same medium. Such as, if they are pixels, have a pixel background. A little epic voice acting would do well in the intro thing. Origins is the word you are looking for, Origans sounds like Ashton's last name. It seems like a Sonic type thing without being Sonic. If Robotnik was supposed to be Slovik, you should have changed the sprite. I love sprite-work animation, as I lack drawing skills I would use sprites if I ever made something good enough for the site. This intro needs a bit more, I understand that it is short because it is an intro, but it lacks much of an introduction. Introduce your character a bit more, show him running after Robotnik/Slovik, and add a cool voice reading what you wrote. It shows that you can use flash at a good basic level, and the basics can take you farther than you might think, but they aren't utilized well enough. This doesn't draw in my attention, the name of the flash is rather obscure, and it could use some work. Consider making a new intro flash before launching your series, and you may get a few fans. The problem is that the only good sprite work that I know of is Super Smash Bros Z. Watch them, learn a few things, get pissed because the dude didn't make an ending yet and probably won't, and then start working. One of the most important lessons to learn is to listen to constructive criticism and always read your comments. I wish this series the best, though I'm not sure that it will get too far.


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sonicx666666 responds:

Robotnik isn't Slovic (Slavic was his real name i typed it wrong) but Robotnik will be having some recolouring. And Super Mario Bros Z was one of the other animations that inspired me to make this. I wasn't able to voice act because:

1) I don't have a decent microphone or recording program.
2) No one want's to voice act in it.
3) I would voice act as Ashton but i don't have a microphone that records clearly.

Sorry if there is any spelling mistakes my keyboard has some sticky keys and by the looks of it starting to go num.

I'am still practicing my flash.


JayChaserJayChaser

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Man...

Work on your next one on a schedule: maybe 100 or 200 frames a day and working on it for 2 weeks...?


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sonicx666666 responds:

I'll keep that in mind. :)


samuraiteam4samuraiteam4

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

this dont have potencial

its better if you make you own history no a parody of sonic


sonicx666666 responds:

What do you mean by a parody of sonic.


Jabalias22Jabalias22

Rated 2 / 5 stars

LAAAAME

Sorry,but...it is not as great as you think.
Almost there...keep on tryin'!!


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sonicx666666 responds:

I was only saying that it was the best that I have done so far because i finally found out how to make buttons work.