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Believe it or not... this is the first thing I do on Flash...
I know it sucks... but everyone starts like that, so
Say whatever you want
I was close to blaming, but this is why i chose not to: It actually has a preloader, it has a play, back , replay and fwd buttons, it does not loop over and over again, there is sound, the birds are very well animated and its much better than the average first flashes that we see around. There is mayor differences in QA from the background, to the birds and to the main guy, my main suggestion would be to be patient, and take your time, idea wise you have or seem to have lots of potential, give your self time to actually develop those ideas and deliver something closer to what you really imagined. keep it up!
I'll get better with the time... but by now... this is it...
room for imrpovment
alot of it...
the backgrround looks like it was made in paint, the actual animation was awful and you could have atleast sprung for a little voice . try better animation against a music video to a popular 80s rock anthem, there always a hit. oh and less french.
That's actually really good for a first flash ever. Movements and characters could use work. Congrats on action buttons; I've been working in flash for months and I still can't make a "play" button.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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