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This is my first ever flash, its something I did for uni. It needs work but Il do that eventually, let me know what I should fix.
Work for uni?
Find it hard to believe your planning to submit this as a uni piece....
Anyhow.. it lacks a purpose.. its not funny, its not interactive.. its not terrifying nor remarkably thought provoking nor beautiful enought o stand without such.
A flash without a purpose where the suer gets notihng out of it is a waste of the viewers time.
yea thats a problem, it has no purpose I was thinking about adding an a scene before the the hare steps into the casino and some different camera angles to it, so it would make more sense.
Thanks for your reply.
It made me laugh
I thought it was pretty good for your first flash. You did a good job animating the characters and giving the hare personality, even though he doesn't talk. The pocket sand part my favorite. The background characters need some more work tho, some of them looked a little out of place, or unfinished
Thanks dude, yea its the first time Iv actually done anything on flash I pretty much learnt everything as I went along, I did completely forgot to make sense out of it though haha.
A short film about a park bench
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