Improvement
This video is not bad, but needs improvement.
Author Comments
This is a commercial featuring my two main character from my web comic strip "Poet Ink." in this commercial they are advertising their deli stand. Hope you enjoy it!
dave198 responds:
Thanks LinkAraujo, and you're right. I know ALLOT of things need improvement. LOL
for one, I want to add more movement to the characters, and also make the mouth sync movements better. But I'm still learning flash as I'm doing this, and this is just my 4th attempt at an animation. I hope to keep improving as I make these.