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Needs To Be Finished
The animation and use of Newgrounds Tanks was neat and I thought it was cool. The voice acting was good even the background animation was nice. The plot seemed to be really cool it's a shame it wasn't finished woulda been good.
While the background animation was good the front animation such as the guy hiding from Pico and most of the ground and trees was pretty bad and seemed to be really choppy it needed some tidying up to be a lot neater. The guy hiding needed some way better character designs as it was see through and just plain lines. The plot appeared to be good but it needed to be introduced a little more to be submitted to the portal finished or not. The pace and sense of timing was just way to short to be submitted in the first place.
Not bad for a few seconds it could be redone as a trailer for an upcoming project of yours to make it a lot more interesting but it has no replay effect.
Who was the guy who was hiding when pico and tankmen came?
otherwise, it wasn't half bad...
I gave you a 5 to help from being blammed
A short film about a park bench
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