The Devil's Bones 1
Credits & Info
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Artist Hyptosis
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- Apr 26, 2011 | 5:28 PM EDT
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- Daily 3rd Place April 27, 2011
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Author Comments
I've been thinking about starting a little webcomic, thought I'd share it and see what you guys think. Don't freak out, it isn't animated, and I didn't see much point in adding audio since it wasn't, and is pretty short. But I wanted to share it any how.
It takes place in a kind of fantasy/steampunk world. The plot will revolve around people who dig up bones in the desert. Kinda hard to explain without it sounding super boring, but hopefully the comic will explain itself.
Some adult content so don't read it at work.
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*Front paged! :O I didn't expect.. thank you. Thank you. ^_^*
To everyone, it is short because this is only the first two weeks of updates. I update once a week with batches of frames per scene. Future updates will be much longer I promise. Thanks for the feedback, it helps.
Reviews
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 30, 2011
Needs more nudity.
Seriously? One nipple? That's the extent of the adult content?
Anyway, nice artwork. I like the style.
And the swearing, it's better to warn people about one nipple than to not warn them at all.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 26, 2011
Great
I liked it a lot, can't wait for you to follow it up
Rated 4 / 5 stars April 27, 2011
Very nice
Never seen a web comic on newgrounds, I'm actually looking forward to seeing the next issue. Good dialog btw
Rated 4 / 5 stars April 29, 2011
Help yourself.
The art work Is nice but it needs to be worked on a bit, the people seemed ok but you may wana practise drawing there faces more cause the faces didnt seem to fit together sometimes. You might wana have someone else write the dialogue cause yours was pretty bad. The nudity is ok to have but usual it leads to people wantng you to draw your people naked or bumping uglys with somthing else so becareful with it, unless you want this to be a bit pornoghraphic. The story you may wana have somone check it cause all we know is that the green chick is looking for a tomb, while you got a cop doing his thing. You probably should have stayed with one character longer to give some knowledge on them. Unless your trying to go for a certain type of opening that
will make sense later, but still someone should check it first.
Rated 4 / 5 stars April 26, 2011
Pretty good!
I'm not really into comics in a swf. If the images are going to be static I'd rather just see them laid out on a webpage. This wasn't too bad though. It was good for what it is. The dialogue was a little cheesy here and there, but the art was pretty nice. My only real question is what's up with the boobie chick? She wears straps that seem to have no purpose but to cover her (clothing) but she only covers one boob. Why is that? I could see if she was going all natural and then I'd reason that's just her way or the way of her people or something.
I could see if she dressed in all straps, she'd be wearing clothing like normal but just expressing a unique fashion sense. But I can't for the life of me figure out why someone would fall in the middle and choose to cover part of it but randomly walk around with an exposed breast. Please explain the character to me.
Well there is no way to see it right now but all of her people dress with those straps, men and women alike. Similar to how you see some greek or roman clothings have an exposed breast. I originally made them completely nude but thought it looked kinda silly. They're also highly religious although you don't see that yet, easy answer is "They just dress that way." But it is a racial thing, not a personal thing.