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Apr 26, 2011 | 5:28 PM EDT
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I've been thinking about starting a little webcomic, thought I'd share it and see what you guys think. Don't freak out, it isn't animated, and I didn't see much point in adding audio since it wasn't, and is pretty short. But I wanted to share it any how.

It takes place in a kind of fantasy/steampunk world. The plot will revolve around people who dig up bones in the desert. Kinda hard to explain without it sounding super boring, but hopefully the comic will explain itself.

Some adult content so don't read it at work.

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*Front paged! :O I didn't expect.. thank you. Thank you. ^_^*

To everyone, it is short because this is only the first two weeks of updates. I update once a week with batches of frames per scene. Future updates will be much longer I promise. Thanks for the feedback, it helps.

Reviews


SpanglishHorseSpanglishHorse

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

nice

too bad its not animated but still nice drawn =)


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TharosTheDragonTharosTheDragon

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Needs more nudity.

Seriously? One nipple? That's the extent of the adult content?

Anyway, nice artwork. I like the style.


Hyptosis responds:

And the swearing, it's better to warn people about one nipple than to not warn them at all.


NateYoukNateYouk

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great

I liked it a lot, can't wait for you to follow it up



OmninescienceOmninescience

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Very nice

Never seen a web comic on newgrounds, I'm actually looking forward to seeing the next issue. Good dialog btw


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DrakePDrakeP

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Help yourself.

The art work Is nice but it needs to be worked on a bit, the people seemed ok but you may wana practise drawing there faces more cause the faces didnt seem to fit together sometimes. You might wana have someone else write the dialogue cause yours was pretty bad. The nudity is ok to have but usual it leads to people wantng you to draw your people naked or bumping uglys with somthing else so becareful with it, unless you want this to be a bit pornoghraphic. The story you may wana have somone check it cause all we know is that the green chick is looking for a tomb, while you got a cop doing his thing. You probably should have stayed with one character longer to give some knowledge on them. Unless your trying to go for a certain type of opening that
will make sense later, but still someone should check it first.