not bad
obviously, your storyboarding could use some more depth
but you're on the way! keep experimenting and submitting to the portal, buddy.
Author Comments
My second submission to newsgrounds.
I tried to experiment a bit more, so I made this quick flash. There is not much to say about this, so...Hope you enjoy it.
ManspritesIT responds:
Thanks for the review. I will keep that in mind!
good, but probably not worth keeping.
The flash was clear, sound was in sync with the progress of the movie. Overall it was well done, but I probably wouldn't keep it on newgrounds.
ManspritesIT responds:
Thanks for the review!