It was a good idea
But tou could have developed it some more so when it finishes, it gives you the "this is the cycle of life and death" feeling. At this rate, it feels incomplete.
Author Comments
They grow up so fast :'(
You come to this planet, you move forward, you leave behind your spirit, and your offspring do the same...this is the cycle of life.
Ef-X responds:
Thanks for the review. Your right about that, no doubt when I get better I'll come back and improve this piece.
