Fail
The drawings and animation could have been faster and better drawn.... it seems as if you didn't even try to make this. Keep trying.
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Why is it dangerous to laugh at a lama
Great concept, awful execution
The idea behind this was a really cool one, and could have been very funny. However, your drawings were awful, your animation went so slow a snail was blowing its horn at it, laughter is not symbolized by ah ah, which is used for sneezing, but rather is symbolized by either ah ha or ha ha, the animation was on an infinite loop, and finally, it is spelled LLAMA, NOT LAMA! Put the extra effort into it, come on.
LLame
You spelled llama wrong, first of all. The video is good for practice, but I don' think it was worth coming.
Its nice
Its funny to me so i have it a 7
5+ cause I seen a angry lama spit on someone before
2+ cause its kinda funny
Learn to spell, please.
There are two l's in llama.
Threstle responds:
Thanks for feedback, even if it's to say that's bad : I didn't expected good review anyway ^^.
This is my bery first flash video, I posted it on Newgrounds just because some of my friends wanted to see it.
By the way, I know I should have checked the spelling before but I'm french, and in french you spell llama "lama" and you say "ah ah" for laughter. So here's the explanation of my mistake. :)