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When me and my friend (Reggie Burt) were bored on a weekend we said to each other lets do somethings constructive, so this is what we came up with.
The movie went on about 10 seconds too long.
Ok, so it's clear you're in your early days of making flas movies and I'm sure with time you'll get a lot better.
But this movie WAS funny, right up untill everything that occured after "bitch slap."
As soon as the bitch slap happened, it should have ended. Don't feel like you need to explain the joke, you'd have got more points for how random it was. As it stands, you took the only funny part and explained it - thus making it less funny.
If you're gonna have voices in their too, concider asking people you know to take over the voice of the guy that says "well for one..." and get a more proffesional sound out of them.
Keep working at it, you've got a way to go but everyone has to start somewhere! :)
Thanks for the advice i appreciate it, ill be sure to think the plot threw more and when i get better at making these animations hopefully the animations will be better
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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