Rated as a first game
This is good for a test game, but in future games I suggest you try to mix the audio a bit better, maybe add sound effects, and most importantly try an original idea. This game has been done a lot before.
I'm not sure what the capabilities of "Game Factory 2" are, but I'm sure you can do better once you get more comfortable with it. If you can do platformers using that engine (or whatever you'd call it), try that. Those are easier to get creative with.
I'll be watching for more stuff from you to see how you progress!
7/10 - Graded on a large curve on the account that this is the first game you've made. If it hadn't been, I'd probably rate it 4 or 5/10.