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Mar 9, 2011 | 3:04 PM EST

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Author Comments

This is my first flash animation! It's pretty cheap, but whatever. I hope you guys like it. This took me like, 5 months to make. Though that was mainly because I had no idea what I was doing for the first 3. I'm not sure how this preloader stuff works either, so I apologize if it doesn't work right. I'll get on it as soon as I can!

Also I forgot to put this in the credits, but all of the music was made by me! So you know who to thank when you hear those awesome tunes.

3/11/11: The Credits are now a part of the main movie, and Paper Pal is the scene select. Enjoy!

Reviews


EidersceilEidersceil

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome

Get that crap outa here !!! xD Duke always makes the diference



Bomber109Bomber109

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good!

That was pretty entertaining. Jokes were great. On the contrary, however, I have some criticisms.

1 - Audio needs to be...better. At some points, the background music is overpowering, and the vocals, although recorded pretty well overall, could be higher quality. However, the sound effects worked great, and the choice of background music was perfect.

2 - Lip syncing doesn't always match.

3 - Scene select?


Camjo-Z responds:

1 - I can agree with this. I've figured out how to adjust sound levels now, so it should be fixed in the second episode.

2 - That was just due to laziness. Tee-hee.

3 - Added as per your request!


MiloticMasterMiloticMaster

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Cool, pretty cool.

Your drawing will improve over time, but I can definitely see the effort in the plot and other stuff. I suggest using a faster framerate, about 20-24fps, it will make your animation (and lip syncing) look a lot better. Credits were awesome, jokes were funny and creative. Kudos!


Camjo-Z responds:

Thanks! I'm using a faster fps in the next one, along with a larger screen size (and some actual animation).


NexusTheVoidNexusTheVoid

Rated 5 / 5 stars

That was...

quite entertainging, actually. Pretty good for your first flash. I rather liked it.



BartomonBartomon

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great job!

Pretty cool to be your first work, there some details to be pulish but I'm sure you arrange them in the future, anyway...well done!