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Alpha Dog + the Bitches 1

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rated 2.72 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original
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dog
eye
alpha
bitches

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Uploaded
Feb 2, 2011 | 8:12 PM EST

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Author Comments

This is an animation my friends and I made that mimics the "construction paper animation" visual style of South Park. This is the first episode, and begins with Quinn and his unfortunate eye problems; then ends with the question "What the hell just happened?". All feedback and CONSTRUCTIVE criticisms are welcome! Original Score by Kelsey.

Reviews


ThyGentlemanThyGentleman

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

lol it madde me laugh..

It was funny and the voices were great but unfortionatly I do have some minor complaints.

When the one guy said holy crap there wasent much feeling in it. He sounded like he was trying to be quiet while yelling which is a downer to hear. Put some feeling into it, if you have to wait until the house is empty the wait.

The art wasent horrible but it waset good, try to improve on that for example add some shades and shines try to add more dimension to the enviornment.

I hate to say but I felt it was south park inspired, just look how their standing and...you get the point

On a final note it made me laugh so I gave it a 5/5and a 9/10 cant wait for the second episode!


FlashnFuse responds:

Ha thank you, I think this has been the most useful review so far.
But it was very south park inspired, that was intentional, and I'll try working on my art more in the future! (episode 2 is done, and we need to voice it, but i'll try to get more artistic talent in episode 3 and further)


DrPZAwesomeDrPZAwesome

Rated 5 / 5 stars

The Greatest Thing I Have Ever Seen

I do not know what to say. This is one of the rare times in my life that words are completely failing me. The magnificence and beauty of what I have just witnessed was enough to bring me to my knees. I cowered before my computer screen in admiration and by the time I stood back up sixteen hours had passed. I shall end this review here because I now know that I should travel to a temple atop a mountain somewhere near Nepal so I can find the great feeling of transcendence this animation granted me once more.


FlashnFuse responds:

I like you!
And if you enjoyed this episode so much, you'll probably love the second one, which should be posted within a week


someguy49someguy49

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Could be a great web comic

Good theme, though the title may be a bit too specific to apply to any potential future episodes. Great voice work and effects. At the end, I did indeed find myself asking "What the hell just happened?" The only thing I found was the text at the beginning goes by far too quickly to read. Otherwise, keep them coming!


FlashnFuse responds:

Thanks for the feedback! The title is a bit more of an inside joke between us, but I'll remember to slow it down for the next episodes!


MasterdrifterMasterdrifter

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Pretty Good, but...

The animation was great, the voices was nearly flawless, and the effects were impressive; though it seems a bit rushed, it looks like you could have added a lot more into it. But besides that, the plot was good and credits were nicely done. Good Job!


FlashnFuse responds:

Thanks! Ya we recorded the voices literally several months after the animation was actually finished (long story), and I had to do some amount of tweaking to get it synched up right, but hopefully the next episode won't have that problem


kazumazkankazumazkan

Rated 5 / 5 stars

hey pretty good

this pretty good

animation good

awsome voice acting

great animation

overall awsome


FlashnFuse responds:

Thank you!