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RECYCLE... ITS GOOD FOR THE CAN>>> and stuff....
my mouth and audio ok?
kindof short ^^
Not a bad start
Potential here if you keep at it, good lip syncing and just try to make it a little longer next time.
A little short, but good
I think that the drawing and the animation were pretty good, but there was so much more you could have done for this little "test piece". With the lip sync, I liked that you used four or five different mouth shapes to convey the speech, as opposed to oscillating between open and closed.
The joke was funny, but if the voice acting was yours, I'd ask that you try to get the punchline to sound like the word "recycled", as opposed to "recycle", since it just sounded like you were cut off in your prime there.
There is an opportunity to increase the length of the film there, by coming up with other bits and pieces - showing us the family of things that are made from Aluminium - cans, aeroplanes, I forget the rest, but Google can help there (sorry for that pun). Giving each one a line and a different accent would help the longevity of the piece thoroughly.
It was good practice, I'd like to see more of your stuff.
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Clean animation, not very wavy. The sound and voice were good, but it wasnt funny. I don't know you but, i think someone working with you would make a great collaboration!
was actually my friend talking. lol.
but we just made it so i could try and animate it.
i just said to say something random and stuff... and thats what he said.
i will have some comedy videos eventually, but this was in the informative genre... though not too informative. however, i will work on comedy for future videos... and stuff.
thanks for the review ^^
Now work some humor into the videos ^^; Animation was alright, though minute. There getting better, good job.
I know your just testing flash so I have to say youve made progress and it shows.
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