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What's the big deal about survival anyway?
I Love it. Point blank and simple. I also love how you aggressively defend your work. People here are assholes, and i like the fact that you have a "Fucking Spinal Column" :) Animation, hell, its just how you express something, it never has to be perfect. It's yours. It doesn't matter if anyone thinks it sucks, if YOU like it, it's awesome. And personally, i like it.
I love how you response to critics, you are right, this is newgrounds, you should be able to come here and post an animation that's crap and nobody should care, because it's free and it's a portal to put whatever you want, there shouldn't be any standars here. "If you like it, fine, if you don't like, it's fine too, don't come here to post critics as if you were a damn PRO" That's a slogan this web should consider.
Anyways, keep up the good work pal, looking forward too see more from you.
This is one of those flashes that proves you don't need to be an amazing animator, or spend weeks making something visually beautiful to get a good idea out.
The end line was definitely something to work on as-well as the animation. Instead of saying "its better than anything you've done" you could take their advice and go with it. Add some sounds add some voices. There are some pretty nice flash tutorials here on newgrounds, so try and check those out. If you have any questions about animation feel free to pm me. You tried, and you probably enjoyed making it, so keep to it and keep animating.
i cant be fucked to go and spend 3 weeks doing a 30 second animation that is up to code with the ridiculously high standards that 95% of newgrounds viewers have [this isnt a website run by fucking Pixar]
i would much rather make an animation short, grungy and to the point in 3 days that has a better plot than any stickman fight montage that every third video on here seems to be [by the way, that was a personal stab at you. way to conform]
add some sounds.
I didn't really find it funny, and i think the animation needed sme work. and maybe try adding chirping sounds por something when the bird talks or have a voice over.
its better than anything you've done
A short film about a park bench
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