The idea is good, focusing on what the tricky zombies can do to people, HOWEVER, the repeating sound of a girl crying is really annoying, as many have pointed out: the text is too fast to read, and even then, the grammar is poor. The animation looks too stiff.
I know that this is a submission from 2010, but this doesn't excuse the poor execution.

um....

well the tetx was to fast to read. But i did like the sound affects in it i hope you work on it so i can see the final one!

Just... bad.

I'm sorry. I wish I could give you a better score, but there's simply nothing here that makes it good. There's a quickly-looping sound of a girl crying, poorly-written sentences that make no sense, and poor recycled animation. Maybe the next one will be better... first, learn to write dialogue properly.

WTF?!...

sry man that didn't make any sense and some parts r 2 fast and other r 2 slow and i don't want to comment about the sounds

what a waste of time

not good in shorts words