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Dec 16, 2010 | 9:49 PM EST

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Author Comments

EDIT: Wow, this time it didn't get blammed!

Not long ago I submitted my first ever flash animation .

Obviously, it got blammed.

So, after reading all the reviews, I made a better, longer one.

Still, this is only my second animation, so, again, constructive criticism and tips are appreciated.

Thanks for watching!



Rated 2 / 5 stars

Keep doin' ur thing...

Reason for rating this a four was only for two reasons:
- Much too short
- the animation drawings were way too flat and the color palette consisted of primary and secondary colors only...
Other than that, keep working at it ! In your next one, try to incorporate frame-by-frame animation along with tweening ! I also recommend Wacom tablet (if you want to get serious).

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Slekryn responds:

Thanks for the review!

About the tablet, I was planning on getting one, so thanks for the recommendation!



Rated 0 / 5 stars


No offense, but the sound was off, animation horrible, and the actual plot made no sense in a bad way.
Along with not being funny, there are a number of reasons you should never make a flash again.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


If this was better than the last one....damn, i wonder what the last one was like.
Still, 5 marks for effort and attention to audio.

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Slekryn responds:

Thanks for the review!

The last one really was, as hard as it is to believe worse than this one :p

-no preloader
-constant loop
-no reaction
-barely any animation

So, yeah, this is a little better. Not much, but still a little.