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It really makes me wonder...
Freaking awesome man! Seriously amazing stuff.
Why didn't you use a different preloader?
It continuously loops, and I really hate that. But honestly I've got to say the animation was good. Voice acting was incredible, and I really felt the hatred and anger and near-insanity he expresses. Your work is accomplished, you've made me hate that woman.
this is a nice animation.
So it is mostly about some dude banging the person u thought u loved
fair to say..
I have a friend who works some management job.. he took a bunch of classes on how to motivate your workers, and explained to me the importance of a compliment sandwich whenever commenting on something someone worked hard on..(lol @ hard on) so I'm gonna start with the good :)
So the thing that really made this was the voice work, and the overall tone of the audio.. in terms of clarity.. well it was intelligible.. and thats about it.. BUT I think thats what made it so damned interesting/creepy.
The thing that urked me the most was the flashing back between live action, and animation. I think it would have been better to just pick one. The art in the animation portion wasn't super impressive.. It was mostly just panning stills and quick motion then quick went back to live action. I this could have worked if you took some serious time on the animation portion, and had more of it. Seriously it seems like a trivial complaint but it really hurt it's potential.
Now with that.. I think the idea as a whole was great! I love what you were going for. And the voice actor did an absolutely fantastic job portraying whatever you were trying to get out of him. So for whatever coaching/direction you gave him, I feel you deserve a round of applause..
All in all, I enjoyed watching. But I think you're capable of more :)
But there was really only a "small" animation party, but i gotta give you some credit for the cradboard scenes. The whole concept behind the narrator was really atmospheric and well done, but the Microphone screwed it up :-/
A short film about a park bench
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