Good start!
-GRAPHICS: 6/10-
Drawings: 7/10
Animation: 4/10
-AUDIO: 0/10-
Voice Acting: -/10
FX: -/10
Music: -/10
Sync: -/10
-CONCEPT: 4/10-
Content: 4/10
Story: 4/10
Originality: 5/10
Execution: 4/10
-OVERALL: 4/10-
-COMMENT-
Don't take it bad for the vote review, i try to be the most impartial i can.
But, beside the completely random story, i like your style and i see something very nice can come out of your head.
Add sound, set an higher FPS rate and with a little bit of practice you'll come out with something very interesting.
Looking forward to see a well animated and sound-bashing chapter 2.
Keep it up! :)