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Worked on this on and off for a few months. Whatchu think?
I found it to be quite pleasant. Its nicely animated, but I agree with acdimalev's point about Abel's lisp. It was actually quite hard to hear what he said, so I had to watch it a second time to get the gist of what he is saying. Still, Ken popping in out of nowhere and Rufus randomly waltzing in at the end was funny. But do keep up the good work, this was still very good.
Also, was that a subtle Dark Knight joke at the start!?
Yes, yes. Because feces would only be appropriate for a mature audience. Except that he pops up at the last moment, completely blowing the *shock*, I thought that was a nice touch.
The joke is good. Something about the delivery kind of loses me. Probably has to do with Dan's lithp being a separate joke that doesn't deliver well as part of the same snap.
Since Dan flaming is a bit of an old snap, you should touch it up with something a little less expected that can drag on the ridicule. Add Cammy to the picture, make her come off as a tranny, and Dan and Cammy can bicker a bit about The flaming uppercut being Ken's special before Ken cuts them off with the exploding uppercut to Sagat.
Then "holy sh[beep]".
I've been on the Internet too long. : (
By Dan I'm assuming you mean Abel? He's not really supposed to be gay or anything. The voice actor couldn't really come up with anything else. Also had I had more time I would have loved to have added more gags. But I appreciate the review!
Well, you tried.
Doesn't really say what I need to work on so tahnks for nothing.
I liked it, but you should work more in your voice actings.. a lot
Thanks for the advice.
cool very cool
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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