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Created and Animated by Tinette Nolan, Vocal Recordings by Joshua Ball. This is my first animation as a student using Flash. Please leave your comments, I'm pretty amped to hear :D
Dit was nogals goed. Ek het dit baie geniet. Baie goeie werk!
Dis moer awesome!!!
Dis sover my favourite!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
Need to work on animating, but good.
I actually really enjoyed this, but it was more down to the choice of music than the animation style itself. The music used really gave it a strange artistic feel, which meant I could look over the relatively poor drawing and limited animation. Sound effects were also excellent, and I thought the quirky story fitted the music well.
The areas to improve on are fairly obvious then- you need to work on your drawing skills, and in particular you need to keep practising with animation- most of what was here was simply an object moving from side to side- it would be nice to see something a bit more advanced next time.
Still, entertaining enough, and showing plenty of potential.
Great, thanx :D plenty of hours still to be put in and improvement is to come :) Im a first year student and still novice to it all, but watch this space :) will spend some time on developing intricacies and detail.
Funny but lacking
Well.. I guess it's not too bad. I thought the voice talent and the effects were pretty funny which saved you I think. The animation needs a lot of work as well as the artwork.
Thanx, yeah, Im still working on developing my drawing and animation style. It took a majority of the time getting use to the flash interface and for some odd reason my bone structures kept on freaking out? awkward perhaps?
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