Its good for a first upload ;)
While I personally think that this is great for a first, it still isn't a 10 (I like it, but you're no "nutcasenightmare") but still, I think it's better than anything I could come up with
Author Comments
Basically, this is my first flash submitted to NG. I've been coming here for ages now, and now I have Flash CS4, I thought 'Why not?'. I'm also on here so people can tell me how to get better. (I don't hate Shadow, I just thought this would be funny)
Edited, and made longer.
cool but
the rock at the end curves off. if yous put a bit more time in you could've made the rock hit the car... the car explodes and sends shadow into the air where he is decapitated/ impaled in a helicopter or something. y'know, if it had a few more things in i would have given it a higher score. good job with what you've got though :)
6/10 cos i can see you put some effort in, unlike most people
Jakest123 responds:
cool Idea, I plan on making it longer, so he keeps dying until he gets a game over.
lol car...
Not that great of an animation, though its still pretty funny XD
5/5
6/10 ((needs some work ;) ))
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3.00 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Oct 19, 2010
- 2:39 PM EDT
- Genre
- Comedy - Parody