Well

It's obvious that you're learning, but I like your style already. It's better than 80% of the 'first animation' videos around here. Reminds me of that eerie salad fingers kinda flash right off the bat. Very short obviously, but I kinda like how he opens his mouth and just weird noises come out. That and the background is pretty good. Obviously could be a lot longer - that would be much more enjoyable. As it sits, it's kinda funny but there's no story and not much to watch.

I'd say you're well on your way to making good flashes. Keep up the good work.

half points

i like the part where it made no sense and it gave me nightmares.

HAHAHA

could use more flash time though

Poor animation deserves poor rating.

Try mixing in some frame-by-frame animation, next time. Make the character less stiff. Give him joints. If you use CS5, take advantage of the bone tool.

effort!

done more than i could :D! good luck with yout series!

Hah.

I laughed, but there's not much here.