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My first flash Submitted to NG. Enjoy. Made With pivot.
nothing too special though.
Looping movies are fail.
Please allow the flash to have a preloader and Please include a title screen to not have it repeat.
Okay for an early flash
The dialog was a bit forced, to the point that I don't think even voice actors could have helped (Though voice-overs are *ALMOST* always a welcome substitute for text dialog.) There was no music, which is really what makes a flash for me, personally. It's a loop, which is almost always frowned upon as opposed to a replay button. The title and theme are pretty unoriginal too. As a final criticism, the artwork was blocky, even for stick figures, and the animation was jumpy. Aside from all that, though, not bad for a first flash, but maybe it should have been dumped off as a practice project.
Not horrible for a first
Not the worst first submission, but still is lacking in nearly every area.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
devoted to the ambulative pleasure
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