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Sep 1, 2010 | 9:18 PM EDT

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My first flash Submitted to NG. Enjoy. Made With pivot.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

its alright

nothing too special though.


Rated 0 / 5 stars

Looping movies are fail.

Please allow the flash to have a preloader and Please include a title screen to not have it repeat.


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Okay for an early flash

The dialog was a bit forced, to the point that I don't think even voice actors could have helped (Though voice-overs are *ALMOST* always a welcome substitute for text dialog.) There was no music, which is really what makes a flash for me, personally. It's a loop, which is almost always frowned upon as opposed to a replay button. The title and theme are pretty unoriginal too. As a final criticism, the artwork was blocky, even for stick figures, and the animation was jumpy. Aside from all that, though, not bad for a first flash, but maybe it should have been dumped off as a practice project.


Rated 1 / 5 stars

Not horrible for a first

Not the worst first submission, but still is lacking in nearly every area.