Awesome video fantom-marshmellow, this is honestly better animation than most people who have been at it for years are able to achieve. Excited to see more from you in the future.

its alright

nothing too special though.

Looping movies are fail.

Please allow the flash to have a preloader and Please include a title screen to not have it repeat.

Okay for an early flash

The dialog was a bit forced, to the point that I don't think even voice actors could have helped (Though voice-overs are *ALMOST* always a welcome substitute for text dialog.) There was no music, which is really what makes a flash for me, personally. It's a loop, which is almost always frowned upon as opposed to a replay button. The title and theme are pretty unoriginal too. As a final criticism, the artwork was blocky, even for stick figures, and the animation was jumpy. Aside from all that, though, not bad for a first flash, but maybe it should have been dumped off as a practice project.

Not horrible for a first

Not the worst first submission, but still is lacking in nearly every area.