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Took a bit of time to make, and I think I've gotten better at animating compared to the crap I've submitted (and had blammed).
I hope all will enjoy. Too bad youtube is being such a butt to me and my uploads. I upload to youtube for general comments, but I upload to newgrounds for critique.
Inspired by the artist, Scott Ramsoomair, this is my attempt at animating one of his comics. Most of it is traced, no duh. I tried animating this as much as possible without using any tweens.
original comic: http://www.vgcats.com/com ics/?strip_id=141
An Admirable Effort!
The animation followed the original comic quite loyally (although I was expecting to see Leo's gran exit from the stall to be different, you know the pee flying everywhere), which brought about great laughs. The extended ending was also well played. The voice acting I feel needs to be improved quite a bit, not to mention the editing of it to cancel out the "recorded" sound and to give it a more natural feel.
All in all, I found it to be a fantastic animation and a good laugh, unless Scott Ramsoomair says otherwise, I say keep the VG adaptations coming!
Thanks for the advice. I did do the flinging pee, although I didn't do it as noticeably as I should have done. I was just being impatient, and that's a folly most amateur animators fall into. but i do this for fun, so no biggie right?
The animation itself was decent, but I can certainly see that the voicing needs improvement. Aside from that, it's alright.
could use some tweaks but otherwise awesome! :D
I liked the idea and the voices were good but the backgrounds were pretty meh...still I'd love to see more! :D
yeah, most of the stuff from the comic was dumbed down for my use, considering i'm not much of an artist.
Pretty damn good!
VG Cats are the greatest!
it has potential.
i think it's better than some of the other videos i've seen. most i've seen are just voice dubs to a slide show of panels from the comics.
Detective Nwar engages in modern nwarfare.
It's a picture that moves.
Music video for Savlonic's Broken single from their new album.
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