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Jul 25, 2010 | 6:00 AM EDT
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Author Comments

Well this one took a while despite it being a minute shorter than the previous episode. Summer time is vacation time, so a lot got in the way of making this episode. Plus I'm animating A.E. Chronics at the same time. Anyway, no real story here still, but enjoy!

Note: Special thanks to Less Than Jake's, Vinnie Foriello, for permission to use their music! Gotta love Ska.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

lmao brillant video

better then the frist i thnik and ill watch a.e later


Rated 5 / 5 stars

LOL! So funny!

This was epic, overall, the humour was top-notch, the voice-acting was funny, and MARIO KART!!!!! Super Mushroom! And the weird toilet guy was funny!

Overall an excellent episode, and I look forward to the next one.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


That's all I have to say for this short.

I got to hand to ya. You're theme was very much what I wanted to any cartoon/anime out there: Girls interacting with boys at a (very) silly level. Oh, the bean bag scene. Love it. Just. Love it. This series is like Lucky Star but on a different level.

Keep it coming, man! I'll sure be waiting for the next episode


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Seeing some signs of improvement

To be honest, going in I really wanted to not like this. While I'm still not a fan in any aspect of the word, I actually didn't hate this one. I'll break it down.

Writing: This was the absolute worst part of the first episode and the biggest point of improvement in the second one. It still wasn't anything notable, and while it was still present, there was nowhere near as much of that reminiscing/inside joke stuff that makes me go "this is so fucking gay" that the first one consisted almost entirely of. I thought the best part of it where the scenes involving the toilet, specifically the exchange where BB wants to get into the bathroom. The "pooping together"concept is something I used in one of my things a few weeks back (obviously animation takes a long time so I'm not implicating you stole,) but the fact that you managed to come up with something that reflects my weird/absurd sense of humor shows that you do have potential to be funny (to me anyways.)
There where a few points where I was just like "wow, that was shit" but for the most part it wasn't bad, just boring. You should probably work on either refining or condensing your scripts.

Voices: I will give props to BB on this one. His performance and delivery was good all around. When he gets loud like in the "what the fuck" at the beginning his voice really stands out. I hate rat's "dumb" voice that he tends to substitute for yelling. Other than that everyone else was at least passable aside from the occasional "mic moving around" sound. As for the rest of the sound design, it did what it was supposed to.

Animation: Aside from the overuse of gradients and horribly tweened mouths I guess it isn't bad, but I really don't like your style. It's cartoony, but it isn't the wacky, fun to look at kind of cartoony (see Oney, Egoraptor, Spazkid, Happyharry.) It just looks kind of basic and dull, and the movements are all very refined and unexaggerated, which just makes it boring to look at. I know I'm wasting my time telling you to change something that you've already committed to, but it's something that really ruins the whole presentation for me.

Overall, I couldn't see myself ever liking this series, but maybe if you continue to improve it'll at least be respectable.

Also, I can't decide whether I think you guys quoting chode is amusing or gay. probably a bit of both.

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WHOOKOS responds:

Very good review. I'll keep improving.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


This episode a big "LOL"!!! I love it! :D