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Sorry about the choose Sasuke button, I'll fix it!
horrible, bad choice of subject, and it is a generic sprite fight, overused naruto characters, and i cannot even list the things wrong with this flash. you messed up when you decided to do a naruto sprite anim.
I don't cut anyone slack for any excuse, this being your first animation, isn't an excuse, even though it isn't bad for a first.
before I start, NEJI is spelled N-E-J-I.
you rlly need to work on aligning your sprites, it was very jumpy, and it looked wrong. :/
plus they literally Jumped like they where on mars, you may want to tone that down.
I hate stand-still animations, animations with no V-cam, because it has no pizzas and It's boring....I recomend you get one a practice with it.
the over all "battle" wasn't even a battle as they TOOK TURNS hitting each other, it wasn't fluent.
sounds aren't needed, but they would add some fun. : D
USE HIT EFFECTS, don't just have him get hit and go flying, it's un-realistic and looks wrong, using hit effects increases the epicness and it makes the audience FEEL the hits rather then watching it, and if they can imagine that the punch REALLY looked like it would've hurt, then you can send him flying, also, sliding the character just a dash when blocking a hit adds a nice effect as well.
remember to remove ALL back ground color from ALL sprites you use, It's just too noticeable that you left the black inside the symbol neji uses for his 64-palm attack -_-...
something else that bugs me-
the finishers look BAD.
like, you can get up not-harmed BAD.
the choose another winner button for sasuke is broken and you need to fix it, DO NOT post in your description to ignore it and choose neji first.
B4 you reply to this angrily like I know you probably will, read what I said and actually go over and fix it, trust me, it'll look much better.
I know it's bad,but i'm making a naruto vs lee and I promise i'll add:Longer fight,sound effects,and other stuff.
id say its good i geuss but it needs some music and its a bit framy when he falls and it shows you the frame so he should make more frames if he made it with frames but id say that was pretty good
Change the title.
At first, I thought it was Sasuke Uchiha versus Negi Springfield (from Negima!) Neji's name is spelled N-E-J-I . Overall great sprite animation.
Not bad for a Naruto sprite fight.
It's reasonably goo for a first try, you just need to add some audio and make the finishing blows a little more epic. Also, next time, rememeber to spell Neji's name right.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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