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Jun 25, 2010 | 1:34 PM EDT

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So, uhhh, what's new? I know this flash sucks. It's my first flash in months and I'm trying to get the hang of it again. I wrote this during a blizzard and never finished it. Seemed easy, so I knocked it off yesterday. It's alright. I've been working on new designs for the characters and such, so don't knock me too much for the crappy art. Sorry the plot doesn't make much sense either. I'm still getting back in the swing of things. My next one will be much, much better.

Reviews


juliodenirojuliodeniro

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 25, 2010

This can aspire to be really something.

Yes, the animation and quality of the voice acting need to be improved, but if you ask me, you have some quality in the characters here, pal. Working in the animation alone (i.e. more frames per second) would vastly improve your results, and a better looking preloader would also be of great help.

Good work, anyway!


IZSBHR responds:

Hey, thanks :) The characters are actually really fleshed out and detailed in my head, but it's that age-old problem of getting your ideas on paper, y'know? And yeah, my voice acting's terrible. I've been working on it recently. Right now I use 24 FPS, although I've considered changing it for awhile. As for the preloader, eh, I guess it's pretty lame. It's old.

Thanks for your thoughts :)


gamesrock908gamesrock908

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 25, 2010

ok but could be better i give it a 7

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IZSBHR responds:

This review changed my life forever.