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Jun 11, 2010 | 3:29 AM EDT
  • Daily Feature June 12, 2010

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Freelance medic Jazz Cassidy is out to make a dollar by any means necessary, but getting caught in a street war between a militant Christian church and a research company that has way too many fans was NOT in the plan. When someone has a gun pointed at someone you love, objectivity and passivism don't mean shit. It takes more than one faction of dicks with guns to fuck up a city...It takes Synergy!

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kr8tokr8to

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars June 11, 2010

lkj

awful voice acting.. at least for the main character, he just had a boring.. unchanging monotone voice. : /



anar14anar14

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 11, 2010

Sweet

this sweet was sweet i want more


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AstrocambriaAstrocambria

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 11, 2010

Fucking amazing!

MOAR!!!!!
I cant wait for new shit!


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JAGS4747JAGS4747

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 11, 2010

it was pretty good

the animation was great and the comedy was pretty good to i would have to say i mean the story jumped around some inches but you could easily fix that if you plan on making another one but hell i liked it!



mastermalpassmastermalpass

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 11, 2010

Hey, here's something new. =P

I would usually rate this material as quite mediocre, but I feel compelled to give it higher ratings because of its originality, in the end the plot is the most important thing, and that is pretty original.

The animation and graphics are good. But all that's missing here is a little more flow. I found it a little hard to get into; I'm still not exactly sure what was going on exactly even though I understand the background. Unless the narrative is supposed to be shady, I think what is needed here is something to fill in the gaps between speech. Be it ambient environment sounds, movement / actions, or facial expressions. I think that this has the potential to be even better.

Oh and by the way, VOICE ACTORS, some of you have some acoustics in your recording rooms, and it really spoils the atmosphere when someone talks outside, and it sounds like their indoors. So I recommend finding a way to record outside or in a more sound-proofed room.


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JazLyte responds:

Thanks for the review =) Storytelling and pacing is something I'm still trying to get down pat, so understandable. I would drag my laptop outside and record but my mic's pretty old/cheap and I have to doctor alot of the acting at least for myself (I play the big black guy), so wind and stuff would probably end up being taken out. However, during all the outside scenes I did add background ambiance as much as possible, but I'll keep working on that.