This doesn't count as a music video, it's just music playing with the lyrics on the screen (and they're not even right in places, such as "last three word poem" should read "latest three word poem."
I'm assuming you're doing this so that people can read the lyrics and know what the song is saying? But with nothing else to look at, that's boring, and in this case, I can understand the lyrics in the song just fine, so there's not even really a need for that.
It would be much better if it had something to look at during the time it runs. Something animated, or at the very least a slide-show. This is just not interesting to watch.