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Hope you all enjoy it :)
It is really good though I think something is missing. Try add in humour or something. The graphics are great as well as the animation. It seems a bit quiet when the mini asian master is speaking to the neenja, I think there should be a bit of background music. Not too loud but just something comforting.
Besides that I absolutely loved it
Keep it up.
Fantastic in nearly every way
What makes this so fun to watch is threefold and instantly puts you above the rest of the usual unfun stuff to watch around here:
1) You have a style that is both at once fun to look at and not derivative
2) You guys actually know how to stage a scene so that it is funny, enjoyable to watch, and easy to read (this takes a lot of skill!)
but the most important is this:
3) You have figured out, unlike nearly EVERYONE who tries their hand at making flash movies, that ANIMATION IS SUPPOSED TO IMPLY MOVEMENT. This is not just a bunch of talking heads set to melodramatic music. It's characters moving and interacting with the environment, which should be the first priority for ANY aspiring animator. That you have this down pat shows your high degree of competence. Another degree of competence from you is that even when the characters are moving very little, you still make it interesting to look at them; this is the mark of a real true-blue cartoonist.
The fat Asian guy made me laugh especially; that was some good writing, lol.
Anyhoo, this is really great, and I'm glad to see a real cartoonist showcasing some great stuff for NG. Best of luck and keep up the fantastic work!
Didn't really make alot of sense though. Wasn't much story structure... funny though!
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