voices

could have been ok if you didn't have to turn the volume way up to hear what they were saying over the background music/noise.

I really dont get this.

Bad mic quality, a silly plot and overall poor visual. Yet it stands as one of newgrounds finest with a 4.39 rating from 627 votes? Like, alright I thought the music was suitable, but it sounded like your voice actors were talking through a rusty tin and the guy who forgot his name looked like a duck hybrid.

I do think the logo was well done, obviously showing you've got potential. Please continue to deliver high potential and goodluck with your future animations!

He's a moron

I have no idea why anyone would deliberatedly have their memory erased just so they could get it back by filling out a form. Of course, stupid characters in fiction can work. The best thing about this was easily the logo. That is like the most CGI logo I have ever seen on Newgrounds! If you guys made your entire submissions exactly like that you would be the most reverred people on Newgrounds! The animation itself was really good too.

It actually reminded me of the animation style by Asppro, only not quite as good. The background is great, it's just that the character designs could use some work. I understand this was just something intended to be short before you made something big. Congradulations on getting such a high rating, anyway. The voices were alright but the biggest problem was that there should be more of a punchline.