history ef yea

its realy cool

Cool informative, needs slowing down.

I love history of groups like this, groups that are very important to human history, but are not very well known of. But on room for improvement... Captions are almost always better than "walls of text" this is because psychologically and physically walls of text are frightening, bothersome, and discouraging, while captions can pop up on the screen while music is playing, or a picture is being shown. Secondly, while I know animation isn't everyone's strong point, a picture slideshow might not get many people noticing your work. All in all, however, I think it's a good flash to help people learn and get in touch with the past. Good job, I appreciate it.

Too fast on the text

Hard to read in time but very interesting.

ugh..

ok long text to unfitting and distracting music is a BAD COMBO! 3/5 and 5/10 for the efford and the fact that I would like to see more historic presentations here, but this slideshow is very bad. I had to turn on my speakers just to write this review. I wish this was better because I would be interested in learning about the Aryans. As I keep checking it, all I see is disgusting text and I pray that the music has stopped. This is actually worst than a book because the music. the music should have been relaxing, the ... shit it loops and the hideous music starts again! ah the neverending torture!
where was i? ok what that rap music? how about something more epic? like some tribal music or a sountrack from bravehart or something?
anyhow, the text needs narration and more images.

I liked it...

Pretty good, it's always good to learn something. However you might want to make it a bit more exciting with some narration or animation.
Don't get me wrong, I'm all for reading it's just that I don't think many people watch flash animations to read block paragraphs of writing. It's always going to more effective if it's entertaining. Good concept, I'm just suggesting that you should make it a bit more engaging.