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if you like graffiti... u will like this :) pls write a review 4 me n tell me wat u think. thanx
haha that was cool i dig the sound track and the pig cop but i rate if the walk cycle was a little more smooth then it would look so much better
If only it where that easy.
-It's not bad for one of your first works that you've submitted.
-Your paint can character is quite interesting. He sprays a little fast though. Try having the spray painting done in real time instead of it just coming up all at once. It would make the animation longer and much more interesting.
-The movement of the characters are also a bit off and need some smoothing out to look better. Just add more frames in the walking dynamics to make it look better.
-Basically just put more time into your work and it will make all the difference.
thanx a lot 4 the help. :) ill try that out on the next one. i agree with what u r sayin, walk cycles need alot of work and i think it wld be cool 2 see how the graffiti actualy forms as he paints it. thanx man
A short film about a park bench
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