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Apr 13, 2010 | 2:46 PM EDT

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I know this film looks crap and unfinished but as I'm moving in a few days I was curious about what I would get as feedback for the first bit.



Rated 3 / 5 stars

A work in progress.

It's a little crude but with some polishing it could be a decent flash. Check your grammar at the beginning *save yourself the trouble of people like me commenting on it later.*
I look forward to your finished project.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Looks good so far!

I know this is just an experiment, and I am looking forward to a finished version.

Hannibal296 responds:

Thanks, I'm going to work on this over the summer holiday and get the visuals and effects and the overall length a lot better


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

needs work

but its ok. the presentation is cool but the episode itself is short