A work in progress.
It's a little crude but with some polishing it could be a decent flash. Check your grammar at the beginning *save yourself the trouble of people like me commenting on it later.*
I look forward to your finished project.
Author Comments
I know this film looks crap and unfinished but as I'm moving in a few days I was curious about what I would get as feedback for the first bit.
Looks good so far!
I know this is just an experiment, and I am looking forward to a finished version.
Hannibal296 responds:
Thanks, I'm going to work on this over the summer holiday and get the visuals and effects and the overall length a lot better
needs work
but its ok. the presentation is cool but the episode itself is short