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I know this film looks crap and unfinished but as I'm moving in a few days I was curious about what I would get as feedback for the first bit.
A work in progress.
It's a little crude but with some polishing it could be a decent flash. Check your grammar at the beginning *save yourself the trouble of people like me commenting on it later.*
I look forward to your finished project.
Looks good so far!
I know this is just an experiment, and I am looking forward to a finished version.
Thanks, I'm going to work on this over the summer holiday and get the visuals and effects and the overall length a lot better
but its ok. the presentation is cool but the episode itself is short
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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