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This Is My Fc And This IS Gonna Be My Introduction to my flashes...so yeah...
Intro... this is to point out how "cool" you are not an intro. Soft it up a bit please.
it would be good with somthing els but by itself its pointless
Great flash, bad intro
This was a very nice flash. It was very high quality for the length of time that it took. However, I don't think it would be good as an intro to your flashes. Why? Because it's 3 megabytes. An intro should be short and small. It shouldn't take almost as long to download as the flash itself. Under no circumstances should you take something this large and tack it to the front of all your flashes.
Moreover, an intro should be short. The animation for this flash was short (and good), but the song just kept going on and on and on. If you're going to have a song as the background to your intro, you should cut if off after a few seconds (ideally, the intro should end as soon as the animation stops). People aren't going to want to wait ages to get to the main content of your flash. They're here to see your real animation, not your introduction.
I'm sorry if this was a little harsh. Again, this is a really nice flash, but I feel like you should rethink your strategy a little bit. Best of luck with all your future flashes.
Nooooo....You wasnt harsh at all....thats just criticism...and i know...ill cut the song....or ill replace it with another and cut it off....and i know...go check out my youtube page...look at my website link its under pyro comet...thanks for the criticism
It looks very good, you sure have made a good impression so far, and I can't wait to see all the videos you're going to make, it's quick and to the point, unlike most intros which overdo it. Very nice animation.
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