This needs more work.
The artwork is somewhat boring and shows no emotion. You need to add expression to the people's faces for a better effect, also try working on animation and 3D. The people seem very stiff, you should try adding body language as well as moving scenery, I noticed car noises in the background, which would be a good cue for moving cars in the background. It does show some work and potential though, but remember if you're going to use 3rd party audio make sure to go with what the author would expect to see.