Too short, bad grammar, virtually unentertaining. Not Trying to be mean or anything, but it (in my eyes) was the truth. It was early 2010 though, I'll check out your latest flash.

i agree with him. vvv

it's not bad.
but it certainly could be better.
i loved the music choice, rise against is perfect for a story like this.
make it longer, improve the grammar, and do voiceovers or speech bubbles, and i'll come back, and i'm cerain it will be well worth a five vote and a ten rating.
good luck.

Short, but well done.

You honestly surprised me greatly. It was well put together, and the art style seemed to help it greatly. I think you have some real potential, but you definately need some practice.

Obviously, longer would be better.

Also, spellcheck would help greatly as well, and for the speech, put it in speech bubbles or go for voiceovers.

I think if you could expand upon this, you could have a real winner, unfortunately, this falls squarely into the average category. Good luck, mate.

grave to be dug

ok animation and use real words instead of lol or actually put the entire word you its not that hard and for goodness sakes make it long enough so if i blink its not over

Extremely Short

Sound effects were good, music was appropriate and the minimalist design is common to stick-figure-fighters. On the other hand, the flash lasted less than 50 seconds. If you are earnest about posting your work online and receiving useful criticism, please submit something long enough to judge adequately. Finally, please, please, please, please use spell check and proper punctuation. No one will take you seriously if you don't.