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In this movie, we see the grate power of communication with a robot!
have a nice day!
The animation style looks a bit like Eddsworld, as much as I hate comparing things to Eddsworld considering how versatile that style is and how many people draw like that. I don't get why the robot doesn't have lip-sync if he has a face like the real characters, if he's not supposed to have lip-sync why not just show computer waves like on Spongebob?
Anyway the humor doesn't appeal to me, it seems a bit too disjointed and reliant on vulgarity to be funny. Y'know, kinda like Family Guy, except worse. Could use some backgrounds in my opinion, it would really add to the setting and make it more enjoyable.
The movie'S alright but
the movie didn't explain why the robot's mouth didn't move when he's speaking.
Oh man this tries so hard and fails so badly...
YOU THINK THIS SUCKS!!! TRY EP. 2!
You have something here, but needs much more
For starters you may want to make it longer with more chacters and more scenes and more backround detail, this one lacked alot of that and couldbenifit from those tips, also more details wouldnt hurt
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above a few tips could help to improve on this
Entertaining and short needs more, i pointed out a few tips that may help
Waw, and your a detective or something!
Okay fine, I'll make Ep. 2 better!
There are actualy alot more charecters but I can't finish it, because I haven't got a Femail voice actor.
that was ok, just make the robot more realistic maybe?,,, Else funny when he said "suck my balls" :D
Can't beat that game!!
It's Payday Fellas !
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