The movie'S alright but
the movie didn't explain why the robot's mouth didn't move when he's speaking.
Author Comments
In this movie, we see the grate power of communication with a robot!
have a nice day!
You have something here, but needs much more
~~REVIEW~~
For starters you may want to make it longer with more chacters and more scenes and more backround detail, this one lacked alot of that and couldbenifit from those tips, also more details wouldnt hurt
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above a few tips could help to improve on this
~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and short needs more, i pointed out a few tips that may help
~X~
FlashMasterXD responds:
Waw, and your a detective or something!
Okay fine, I'll make Ep. 2 better!
There are actualy alot more charecters but I can't finish it, because I haven't got a Femail voice actor.
ok!
that was ok, just make the robot more realistic maybe?,,, Else funny when he said "suck my balls" :D
not bad...not good...
The movie was pretty funny.
although the art and voice acting weren't good.
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