Is that music from Donnie Darko in the preloader? xD Seems oddly familiar. Anyway.

I liked the kind of "dated" animation style, it really works well. It kind of makes the entire thing feel quite creepy from the start. I think as well as that, the fact the stickmen have lips is REALLY disconcerting, which is both creepy and brilliant. it's just not something you see and I suddenly realise why. The animation itself was also nicely done, though I thought at the end it could have been a little smoother than it was. As well as that, the "lol:P" caption was a little unnecessary; it would've been better putting something else as the reaction there, or maybe even just a blank caption, because the 'lol' really detracted quite a bit, and it was definitely an opportunity lost to put something more suitable or more creepy in there.

I liked the lack of voice acting; I think having the people say the lines probably would take away from the animation because you've got the captions there. The music itself was also well chosen and fit with the flash itself. Wish this was longer, because it did seem to stop prematurely of where it could have, but for the length it was, I think this was a very well done flash. Keep it up.

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~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was a great little episode here you should make this into more of a series with lots of clasic silent film type but with a dark humor such as you did with this one, it was abit on the shortside but i still found it to be entertaining

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more to ot as you said it was abit rushed but would have been funnier to see it go on abit

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and scary at the same time

~X~

The style of the flash is really nice. You captured the atmosphere of the old silent movies pretty well.

However, I didn't like the "grainy" effect on the canvas too much, as it was static. If it was a movie on television, those grainy dots would move around a bit and there where cracks in the material.

Anyway, as I've already said, you still managed to caputre the atmosphere quite well. The story was a bit weird, but the ending was funny. :)

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lol, every time I watch your movies I want to laugh, it's pretty simple, but it's pretty funny and well done, you made a nice story, (short one) but it was very funny to me, the drawings made me lol, such as the script.

The animation is very good, I liked the drawing, because is pretty simple to draw a madness guy, but it's not simple to draw it with perfection, you made a great character, and you have potential to make more and more funny and awesome movies, just keep on trying, until you get the first of the day, what would be great...

Anyways, i liked the movie, you draw pretty well and you're creative, congratulations, man, keep it up w/ the good work!!

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Roger

...This is really well done. Fun to watch more than once and merits a few laughs on the way. Good job, this is well done ^^.

I like that this has the retro-style animations, since it really makes it stand out from any other madness flash, and judging the amount of madness flashes there are here on Newgrounds, it really isn't that easy to be original, so this was a nice change ^^. The animation was top-notch, definitely, and I liked the fact that you had different facial expressions. Towards the end the animation got a bit sloppy, but overall the animation was fine. Good job!

The concept of madness, as I said, is quite unoriginal since madness is used so much on NG, but the fact that you added your own twists to it gave it a lot of originality, so I can't really call this animation's concept unoriginal. The story itself was pretty random, but it made me laugh, especially when the guy said 'lol :D'. Randomness FTW :D.

The audio was fine. Menu music was good, and the music you used throughout the flash fit perfectly. The old fashioned subtitle screens took place of any voices, so I can't say that this animation needs any voice acting. Yeah, overall, the audio fit very well with the flash and was great :D.

Overall this submission is a nice little short, fun to watch and it made me laugh. Great job. The only thing wrong about it would be the last part where the animation wasn't too good. Other than that it's awesome. Sorry for not giving you a 10/10, giving a 10 to such a short submission seems a little unjust.
9/10
5/5

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