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A Spontaneous Chap

March 3, 2010 –
October 16, 2011
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

One day, I randomly decided to make a spontaneous cartoon, about a spontaneous chap.

The entire cartoon, is based around the Burnt Face Man series while I was making it.
Which is why it's marked down as "parody"

Animation by:
Chris Manzi

Music by:
Locust Toybox

This cartoon took me about 3 days to make. So it's a bit crap, but it's still better than a lot of parodies on this site in my opinion. In fact this cartoon main purpose was supposed to be an introduction to my stuff on this site.

Help Kamatachi, and buy our products:
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Reviews

Let me start with the bad, I have to say the sounds were obnoxious and the voices were oddly done, but I kinda just took it with the cartoon. But as I read in your comments you know this :).

The one thing I really did not like at all is the fact that you did this flash for publicity. Don't. Do not make a work of art for publicity, make it for yourself. Something you can be proud of and say, hey I want to share this with "The World...of new grounds, and other flash sites". Because the only publicity you would get with a flash like this is publicity that you don't want. Then again I have not read all the reviews for this flash.

All in all though I did chuckle at the part where the anchor complemented the other guy on his moustache. Things like that, little things that put a smile on your face is what I am looking for, and seems that most others are too.

Keep up the good work, seeing this cartoon I know if you really put work into a flash that you can truly be proud of and really just feel good about it, then and only then should you put it up on newgrounds, not saying you didn't feel this way with this flash, but in your comments it seems that you weren't too happy with it.

All in all, like I said before, keep up the good work, I would love to see more of your work on this site and really see the thought and process put into your work, because it does show if you cared about your flash, and felt confident,

ZombifiedMind

P.S.

It feels like radiation to me.

It's a blatent copy of burntface man and using locust toybox further just disregards any respect for Firth, not only is it not funny, massively copied and poorer quality than burnt face man, overall it's just rubbish. To improve I would suggest getting your own ideas and maybe stop spamming the portal with something thats "acceptable for now" when you could post something thats actually worth originality. I cant see the other reviews, but I'll wager their on the same lines as I am if they've known where your coming from with this. Also momentish, while being a pleasent sorta' tune isnt really the most fitting for an attempted comedy.

fuunnny

I mean the animation style was almost identical, and the scene about "smelling radiation" was almost identical to one from burnt face man. It wasn't awful, but it wasn't great either. If you admit that you are "upset with the voices, and animation a bit on this video" then you need to rework it until you're proud of it.

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Score
3.88 / 5.00