Your voice acting is incomprehensible.
As in the title. If your mic quality isn't up to the task to begin with, don't complicate the matter further imposing overdone wacky voices.
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I did this as a school project for a biology class last year. Got a C, so i never put it on here in anger. But, somehow I stumbled upon it today after looking through files. So here it is :D
nothing too interesting
it might be good to add some background images to show the movement of the guy, the sound quality could use some work, and the story isn't very good or funny