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Feb 12, 2010 | 1:52 AM EST

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This is my first flash animation



Rated 0 / 5 stars February 12, 2010


bad animation, messed up sound, horrible song, just bad.


Rated 3 / 5 stars February 12, 2010

Good for a first attempt

It's quite good for your first attempt, I like how you do the fading at the beginning.
Work more on the lines of your objects and add in more facial expressions.
As for the beginning writing and the ending writing, I would suggest doing something sort of like it's being typed out (That's my preference).
Btw, is that you singing?


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 12, 2010


I loved the Kung-Pow reference, not the whole killing thing, it doesn't go with anything...


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars February 12, 2010


I can understand that this is your first flash but,
1. The animation was crappy
2. The sound quality is terrible
3. Its repetitive
4. Its on a loop
5. The animation and song have no point what so ever.
Please try again.